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Journal Entry: Thu Jul 24, 2008, 8:41 PM
(sketchdumps not over, just postponed for now-- otakon prints are priority ! wahhh)

this is bad as a journal entry, but i'm in a rush

so here's sasuke's head



WHAT'S WRONG WITH IT :( ?! (you can be HARSH)
it's easy to miss errors when you've been staring at something for too long, which applies to this case X_X haha

my dad walked by when i was drawing this and said it was super fugly ;D; /sob; i can't tell what's off

//EDIT//
took the advice * D* TY GUYS you're life savers



look better? ;__;;

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~ParsnipSniffer:iconParsnipSniffer: Jul 24, 2008, 8:12:41 PM
O_O your dad's mean.

ummm. I think his eye is too big and high up? or it might be that ... his hair looks too flat on his head/too small for his face in general.

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^^^ i just ps'ed it and moved his eye down and expanded his hair .___.' but it doesn't really look like your style anymore. i just wanted to show what i meant xD

yeah i have no life sorry orz

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YOUR MOM!
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~Milly-Fox:iconMilly-Fox: Jul 24, 2008, 8:13:03 PM
Um, maybe the eyes are a bit too far up the head? I realize it's tilted, but the lower lashes should be resting at the top of the cheek.
That's all I can really see that might be wrong ^^' I know how you feel about not being able to see mistakes. It looks pretty though!
~E-Lien:iconE-Lien: Jul 24, 2008, 8:17:41 PM
OHHHHHHHHHH
it looks a lot better @-@ !
lol and yay for crazier duckbutt hair

tyyy ~T-T
~E-Lien:iconE-Lien: Jul 24, 2008, 8:19:14 PM
oh pooo ;D; gotta move the eyes down some more (lol believe it or not i moved down before) who knows how bad it looked then X__X

thanks !
~DRiderTyrael:iconDRiderTyrael: Jul 24, 2008, 8:22:14 PM
there is no forehead D=
it just sinks back into the skull
so widen the angle a bit
and the eyelashes for the hidden eye are sticking too far out considering they are short on the right eye (left in photo)
here i made some edits =]

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~ParsnipSniffer:iconParsnipSniffer: Jul 24, 2008, 8:25:20 PM
no problem C: glad to help.

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~bingsu:iconbingsu: Jul 24, 2008, 8:28:34 PM
The hair/head covered by the hair looks too small compared to the face.
~E-Lien:iconE-Lien: Jul 24, 2008, 8:28:57 PM
oooooh thanks !
*D * redlines really help~
augh man i still have no idea how i drew the eye so high up (it was higher before lol)
=xSYNNcere:iconxSYNNcere: Jul 24, 2008, 8:33:35 PM
I thought it was really good when I saw it. And then I had top focus hard. rofl.

It looks like there's more perspective on the top half than the bottom half of the face.

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